Sunday, July 31, 2005

What Can Replace Rizla

fight: make a fight

There will certainly be many of you write the stories are where it comes to fight. A struggle should be written so that the reader mitfiebert. You should not let him run too obvious.

First of all is of course important, which takes place between the figures struggle. You should not fight the "fit" too busy with never-ending discussions, as we see it often in several movies. This can actually be even more annoying in written form, as it is in the movie. However
play dialogues often an important role. You should make sure that the dialogues are limited to essential and not drift in any of uninteresting stuff. After a short conversation, you can begin the fight. Of course there are also cases in which a slightly longer dialogue, the story is quite beneficial. Whether this is the case with you is to decide individually.

Now begins the real fight. Here, the following things are important to you,
- where skiers
- - WHO
struggling with what weapons will be fought

especially points 2 and 3 can be combined with each other. If your current fight for example in a training hall, you can even use the weapons that are on shelves, which are on the walls in the hall. Of course, should also go only if your characters what they find in the area, can use it.

you should you make the effort and describe the area during the fight. If the environment is suffering from the fight, give yourself the trouble to describe this now and again. Have Stone slabs on the floor cracks? Fallen trees or even through the struggle?
The choice of weapons is important. Bullets whistle through the air while clanking swords hit each other.

As important as it is to bring in details, you should also be careful not the fight is drawn too long and loses its tension. If he loses in power, it becomes boring for the reader. So you have to learn to balance with what you will manage determined over time.

Think about it: a battle does not always end with the death of a character. Escape or abandonment are two other possible endings. You should also remember that the end of the fight may have serious consequences for the plot of your story, so it has to fit in is the ending to the course of history.

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